The Whipperwills Song (haiku) ~*~Dawn's POTW For 05/04/09~*~
The Whipperwill's Song The whipperwill calls While the waning moon is high Lonely is the song Dawn's Poem Of The Week For 05/04/09
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That's soooo pretty.. and its mos def the Whipperwill's sound I love most from birds :)
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I know that song all too well... Great expression Denise...very deep thinking...
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Thank you Suzy...for reading and commenting. Ayana...We have at least one in the woods behind the house, I got to hear her every morning because I was awake early enough. She came back for spring....
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~ML~ Beautifully painted =) Most enjoyed the read this evening ~
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It is a Lonely sound, especially the echo that plays alone *sigh* Wonderfully done Denise... Bri~
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Love how the image of the Moon works here, Denise. Excellent! ~ Bruce
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Poet In Pink wrote: ~ML~ Beautifully painted =) Most enjoyed the read this evening ~ Thank you Alana...glad that you enjoyed it.
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excellent haiku, Denise! cheers, Tasha :-)
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Mom, this is a true haiku...all the elements are there and the emotion runs high! Excellent work and much enjoyed!
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Denise, Sometimes, like here, it's amazing how a few words can roll a video with sight and sound. Very well done. Hugs,
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passionaterider wrote: It is a Lonely sound, especially the echo that plays alone *sigh* Wonderfully done Denise... Bri~ Bri - yes the echo is even lonelier. Thank you for reading this kind Sir, and...
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Diamond Rose wrote: Love how the image of the Moon works here, Denise. Excellent! ~ Bruce Bruce...I only hear her when the moon is out...thank you for noticing that and for your eyes and comments.
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Tasha1 wrote: excellent haiku, Denise! cheers, Tasha :-) Thank you Tasha.
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willowandrye wrote: Mom, this is a true haiku...all the elements are there and the emotion runs high! Excellent work and much enjoyed! Ken...thank you. Glad you enjoyed it.
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aMourningGlory wrote: Denise, Sometimes, like here, it's amazing how a few words can roll a video with sight and sound. Very well done. Hugs, Thank you Cherri..glad it was able to create such a picture.
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stoppin' back in to sayyy....congratulations on my pick for Poem of the Week **hugs** ~dawn~
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Aww...thank you Dawnie ... I'm honored that you chose this
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